The first few paragraphs of "facts" are pretty much speculation, unable to be substantiated. Can you really say for sure what anyone's internal motives are? No, you can only guess. If you don't like Sen Clinton (which apparently the author doesn't) you'll naturally assume the worst.
But the numbers:
1) (hopefully) TRUE! Good for her. The adminitration and practices of the GITMO prison have been a disgrace to our country and its supposed model justice system.
2) FALSE! She wants monitoring to be under the jurisdiction of courts, like current law prescribes it to be.
3) FALSE! No one has said anything about full Constitutional rights.
However, since when do we not support the right to due process for everyone? I believe there are international treaties to that effect as well.
4) FALSE! Again, she wants court jurisdiction of all governmental monitoring activity. Again, as our laws dictate (including the Constitution).
5) FALSE! Yes, she wants to stop torture. So do most experts. The verdict: TORTURE DOESN'T WORK!!!